Thursday, September 11, 2014

Ex. 5.9

Crash:
  
Who: Air Force Major Rufus N. Herbernoski, had no known connections locally
What:  15 cars were destroyed in the mall's northern parking lot when aircraft crashed into them; no one on the ground killed
When: Today at noon
Where: Super Shopping Mall on western edge of town, was stationed at Little Rock Air Force Base
Why: Jet aircraft he was piloting crashed,
How:

Type of Lead:Summary Lead
Lead: Today at noon 15 cars were destroyed in the Super Shopping Mall's northern parking lot when an aircraft crashed piloted by an Airforce Major who was killed upon impact, however, no one on the ground was killed or injured.

correct:
A major from Little Rock Air Force Base was killed and 15 cars destroyed after a jet crash noon Thursday at the Super Shopping Mall.


City Council:

Who: City Council
What: 10 percent increase in city proper taxes
When: this morning
Where: Town Hall
Why: double size of city park
How: Increase will cause average taxes to go up by about $50 yearly, higher rate takes effect at the first of next month,

Type of Lead:Summary Lead
Lead: This morning the City Council met at Town Hall in which they decided on a 10 percent increase in city proper taxes which will take effect at the first of next month, causing the average taxes to go up by about $50 yearly for the purpose of paying to double the size of city park.

University Raises:

Who: university vice president for finance, Harold R. Drazsnzak
What: an announcement that all faculty and staff will get 15 percent pay raises, first raise in two years
When:take effect this fall
Where: front steps of the university administration building
Why: possible because of increased revenues from the state
How:"Without a doubt, our faculty is long overdue to get a raise."

Type of Lead:Summary Lead
Lead: Columbia University's vice president for finance made an announcement this morning on the front steps of the university administration building stating the faculty and staff will get 15 percent raises, the first in two years, which will take effect this fall due to the increased revenues from the state.

correct:
For the first time since 2012, Liberty University employees will receive a 15 percent pay raise this fall after an increase in state funding for the school.


 Journalism Students Meet

Who: Journalism Student Association, about 200 students
What: Tuition is supposed to go up by 10 percent beginning in the fall semester
When: Today at noon
Where: the University
Why: Members decided to organize a boycott of all journalism classes tomorrow to protest university tuition increase
How:

Type of Lead:Straight Lead
Lead: Today at noon about 200 students met for the Journalism Student Association to discuss tuition about to go up 10 percent in the fall semester, upon which they decided to organize a boycott to protest against the university tuition increase.



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